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  • Poetry » Other, Literature
    Re: Monster Hunter

    I like the repetition of Monster Hunter, making it sound almost like a desperate plea for them to head the words of the poem. Also, I do find the last ...

    Oct 28, 2012

  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic
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    I find this piece to be truly a tectonic force. Volcanic in its ability to evoke emotions and stir the gently purring soul of the reader. I do agree with ...

    Aug 31, 2012

  • Lyrics » General, General
    Re: The Fire Within

    That was a really cool song, but I'm with whence. The last line of the chorus does seem a bit short. It probably would work better if we had music ...

    Dec 26, 2007

  • Poetry » Other, General
    Re: The Lindsay

    Haha, that's cute. The spontaneity adds a little something to it that makes it worth the loss of 30 IQ points. It's really amusing. =P Not bad for something that ...

    Dec 19, 2007


I love her dearly, but I can’t live with her for a day without feeling my whole life is wasting away.
— Miss Kenton, The Remains of the Day by Kazuo Ishiguro