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Thanks for your review Noelle - that was very helpful :)

En extremely eloquent poem with sets of images which, although patriotic, aren't overpowering. Very well done - you effortlessly pulled off what would have been quite a tricky piece

Thanks for your valid points, twit - you're right, it does need some more plausibility to it. However, I must say that as indicated in the final sentence, the rest ...

Thanks for the review smylin, i'm pleased to see that it works as a piece of writing :)

very original and a good example of beauty in simplicity. I would have liked to see some more length to it, but other than that it's great :

Thanks for all the comments- I really appreciate it. Though this is definitely not my best work as this was cobbled together in half an hour at two in the ...