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  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Darkness II

    I love how you go so deeply into your poems. You send a clear message to be about it. I really like the darkness of the poems :3. I try ...

    Mar 18, 2010
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Darkness I

    this is a very good start. I like it alot =) if you could find somethings to add on to it, I think that you could go really far. I ...

    Mar 18, 2010
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Sky

    I think this is a good poem. But the only thing that i really see that bothers me is the rhythm. You are off. I tried reading this out loud ...

    Mar 10, 2010
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: I can't do it, I can't move on

    i like your poem and have a few friends that can relate to it. I have been put into the guys perspective in this poem. I have told people to ...

    Mar 10, 2010


When I use caps I do not want you to read it like a little screech, I want you to read it like a 5,000 year old ogre with the strength of 10,000 men.
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