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Re: Darkness II
I love how you go so deeply into your poems. You send a clear message to be about it. I really like the darkness of the poems :3. I try ...
Mar 18, 2010 -
Re: Darkness I
this is a very good start. I like it alot =) if you could find somethings to add on to it, I think that you could go really far. I ...
Mar 18, 2010 -
Re: Sky
I think this is a good poem. But the only thing that i really see that bothers me is the rhythm. You are off. I tried reading this out loud ...
Mar 10, 2010 -
Re: I can't do it, I can't move on
i like your poem and have a few friends that can relate to it. I have been put into the guys perspective in this poem. I have told people to ...
Mar 10, 2010
