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Re: Winter murder...
Oml...I love your username
Jul 27, 2016 -
Re: Between the raindrops on my window
This piece was beautiful, scary and sad all at the same time! I was absolutely hooked on this from the moment my eyes read the first sentence, well done! I ...
Jul 26, 2016 -
Re: Love and Death
This is a beautiful yet terrifying piece of work, and I absolutely love it! I really enjoyed how you used your metaphors and how you wrote the piece in general. ...
Jul 26, 2016 -
Re: Winter murder...
Hey there! First off I didn't even realize I had written "fell on her face" because I had forgotten to read over the story before publishing it (woops!) Second, all ...
Jul 26, 2016 -
Re: Winter murder...
Hey there! Thanks a lot for the helpful advice and I will try my best to improve my work. I plan on making a prologue which will explain how the ...
Jul 26, 2016
