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  • Short Story » Horror, Dramatic Re: Winter murder...

    Oml...I love your username

    Jul 27, 2016
  • Short Story » Realistic, Dramatic Re: Between the raindrops on my window

    This piece was beautiful, scary and sad all at the same time! I was absolutely hooked on this from the moment my eyes read the first sentence, well done! I ...

    Jul 26, 2016
  • Short Story » Narrative, Spiritual Re: Love and Death

    This is a beautiful yet terrifying piece of work, and I absolutely love it! I really enjoyed how you used your metaphors and how you wrote the piece in general. ...

    Jul 26, 2016
  • Short Story » Horror, Dramatic Re: Winter murder...

    Hey there! First off I didn't even realize I had written "fell on her face" because I had forgotten to read over the story before publishing it (woops!) Second, all ...

    Jul 26, 2016
  • Short Story » Horror, Dramatic Re: Winter murder...

    Hey there! Thanks a lot for the helpful advice and I will try my best to improve my work. I plan on making a prologue which will explain how the ...

    Jul 26, 2016


Pain is filtered in a poem so that it becomes finally, in the end, pleasure.
— Mark Strand