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Uh, this is just a quick response (will do a good, full lengther later). The thing that struck me most was that they all spoke like they were in a ...

OK, I know this is an extract and all, but... well, I'm in the dark as to what's going on. I mean, I can get some parts, its just that ...

You should consider making this into a true short film! It would be awesomesauceome. Eliza: (Poofs into the meadow in a cloud of purple smoke and looks around.) Um… Where ...

Right. This is a goodish work, but it's a bit cliched. Evil aliens! Thirst for vengeance! Normal kid turns hero! Maybe if it were like that movie, I forget the ...

Alright. I think that its... OK, good even, but I was not really sure if I liked it or not. The story idea is good (or has potential), but I ...

OooooKaaaay. I'd like to ask, what is going on here? Is this a world war (through the railroad tracks and stuff), or is it a... what? I didn't exactly understand ...

I have this thing that always gets to me; I read something, and then the bombshell is dropped, and (I don't guess it) but I just go 'O-oh, so that's ...

I think that this piece really shows the panic during an air raid and the crushing loss of a parent, but also the point of how kids were drawn in ...

First off, I would like to say that its really good! There's enough background, so you know where they've been (Neetu; the Himalayas), and their relationship with each other, without ...