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Ooooh! Dark n twisted, my favorite! How ever I'd like to maybe point out some areas that could be improved. A retired Janitor named John May Admittedly, I didn't think ...

Well, as the sister of an avid Halo fan, I think I have enough grasp on stuff. despite your being truly human This confused me. So, Vran Ikanporamee is Sangheili, ...

I quite liked it; it has the beginning of something good. Alright, nit-picking time (I'm not good at this): I close my eyes and bite back the tears, feeling the ...

Hey, I'm Hero. The very first thing I thought of when reading this was that song, 'Way Down in the Hole', the opening song of the TV series 'The Wire'. ...

Let me just say, I like it. At first, when you see he's a vampire, I instantly thought 'Damn, another Twilight ripoff, and it will be bad'. Luckily for me, ...

Hi! Since I see this is your first fic, let me just say, congrats, you know, for the first fic. *applause* OK, time for the review. Personally, I think the ...

Hero here. First off, I like it; it reminds me of a piece I once did, you know, except I never continued it and it wasn't romance. Anyway, I just ...

OK, I'm Hero, and I'm here to review. she could have been doing home work face-booking. First off, 'homework' is one word, and 'facebooking' isn't really a verb. I think ...

This is Hero, here to review a bit. To be honest, I didn't really like it. Its a sentence that tells too much, as Kate.Grace already said, but that's not ...

Heya, Hero here. First off; know its hard with new works, so will go easier than I'd originally planned. I'm the characters/plot one, by the way. So, if you're comfortable, ...

First off, I will say sorry for not reviewing the first four Breenas. I just, well, couldn't be bothered :D . Anyway, to the point: Characters (Or at least, how ...

I. Just. Have. To. Say. This piece didn't work for me. I didn't read a lot of it, so maybe I might not be the best of reviewers but... The ...

I think it's pretty good; although, I'm not really sure what genre it is. Rock? Pop? Punk? I dunno. I wouldn’t as 'ask' Other than that, yeah. Although, just clarify ...

Not feeling up to a full review, but, some points. 1) The fingertips. Yeah, its more original than the bitey-fangs, but Darren Shan already did that. Actually, Darren Shan did ...

Can I just say that all the names sound really, really cliched? I'm sorry, but I find fault with names that illustrate who the person is; its like their parents ...