hermes92

Its a meaningful poem that was a little depressing. I can relate to it. I guess you can say that "its so beautiful it makes me cry" in a way ...

ty for the reviews!Im going to add more soon.

You have made a couple capitalization errors but aside from that it turned out to be a great work. I loved the ending. The tone of the story caught my ...

I liked how it was in depth. It made a lot of sense, It sounded good, and it was correct. Overall it was the definition of a good work.

This poem was good in its detail. The name was especially what caught my attention. You should go in depth more. Everything was perfect except for the poem structure.

The story made a valid point. Everyone is their own individual. We should all embrace our individuality. Although there was a few grammar errors and You used copper a little ...