helpless42

really great! I loved it. fantastically wonderful...and my thesaurus is missing so i cant think of another word. i really like the cat, it was awesome! I was laughing through ...

Wow, you got hit pretty hard with typos huh? I hate it when people do that. I put my stuff out for people to tell me what they think about ...

its really good. Im totally into the whole vampire thing and this is great for your age. you could space it out a little more though. when I looked at ...

Hey, this is really good. I mean like really good. I like it a lot, but it seems a little long winded. Remember that too much of a good this ...

good good, but im a little confused. when you siad dripping with steal, Was it melting or was that supposed to be something else. (it would have to be very ...

wow. thats all I can say is wow. you have it down, the whole death mood. you show me into his mind. The numbness, its just right. you got the ...

Good, I liked it. Yes I agree the plots a little confusing, but I think I know why hes trying to kill him before his time is up. reminds me ...

Gosh, people like to put you down for grammar huh? I get that alot! remember people, this is a rough draft, its not going to be perfect. I like the ...

yeah great! I like the idea of having a whales point of view. I love the ocean and so I think this a a great idea. I agree with scasha ...

oh pish posh on grammar, its a rough draft right, he can fix that at the end. I personally loved it. its coming along nicely, still waiting to find out ...

OMG! this sounds just like something wrote back in the fifth grade, minus demons and amulet, just orphanage and nightmares. but yours is way better. i like it a lot, ...

good. I like it. kinda reminds me of avatar, and dragon rider, remember to add your own ideas and not just put stuff together. remember the best recipes are the ...

Ok, :smt104 a little wierd, but still good. But whats with the crazy teachers? is this some weird messed up school? Oh never mind, I have to addmit it was ...

I like it, a lot. especially the start of it. I know your aware of some errors, but hey, this is a rough draph and who am I to critize ...

ha ha!(not a funny laugh, a "I found something I like" laugh) loved it. great beginning, but like king said, a little more description wouldn't hurt. I understand this is ...