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Ok, so I saw you had no reviews yet so I thought I would help you there. This is generally quite good. Grammar all in all is very nice, you've ...

Hey, Jayleighsmith, thanks for PMing me! As the last one, it's really good. And as fairygirl said if you want a deep review I am not you gal either. I ...

Hellooo Jayleighsmith! I really like this! Well done. I saw the title on the YWS front page and couldn't help clicking on it and reading it. Brill title! Characters: Well, ...

Hey, singingsaturdays. I really liked this. You have this easy way of writing which makes it effortless to read it and all you want to do is continue reading more ...

Hey SASSYLADY! Well, first of all. Brilliant title!! "There's something about Jerry..." Very good. And I can see you are also writing about a Jones :P haha brill. Now, i ...

Hey, Emsie dear! So this the Dylan, huh? Oh, must I say I really liked this one! And I am getting so used to our mails and stuff that I ...

Oh, this was just lovely. I like the way we can all relate to it. It's the exact feeling of being in love or having a crush on someone. And ...

I really liked this, I have to say. I mean, it was simple but it is one of those songs that reminds you of the good `ol bubble gum sweet ...

Hey, Ems! Your ending is fab! You leave me hanging for more! I can't wait for chapter 3 now! Critisism: - There are still some spelling mistakes and words that ...

Hey! I'm sorry it took so long to look at your work, but I've been soooo busy lately. Anyway, you asked for my opinion, so here it is: -I read ...

Hi! I'm Liz and I just felt the need of dropping a few lines to you. 1. I see there is three chapters in one here. Not necessarily a bad ...

HI! You know I really liked this. And the fact that it doesn't show to much imagery doesn't bother me. I liked it. Thinking can save your life, thinking too ...

Ok, so I was just scrolling down the front page of YWS and your story totally captivated me. I couldn't take my eyes of it until the end. And as ...

OOOO. Me like. Very exciting ending. I can't wait for the next chapter. There are a lot of spelling mistakes, try to work on those. Even so, if you are ...

This is really good. Perfect ending, keeping us wondering what is gonna happen?? Apart from som spelling mistakes here and there and too long sentences, it's really good. And who ...