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Short, sweet, and to the point. Not much to review is my only complaint because I can't find anything wrong with it.

Is that good or bad?

I really like the new ending :) This one totally isn't a cop-out

Thanks for the review! And the criticism you gave actually makes sense so thank you for that too :)

Thanks sooo much! I've been having issues with this poem ever since I wrote it and I really appreciate that you actually pointed out some parts that can be fixed ...

I love this, palindrome poems are always so cool. I prefer it going from top to bottom more bc it's just more motivational to me but it's really good both ...

Thanks (:

Thanks!

That is a cool concept, i dunno maybe I just wasn't apart of the intended audience who would of picked up on it, still liked your poem :)

Just basically how sometimes 2 lines would rhyme then another 2 lines would rhyme and then ANOTHER 2 lines would rhyme but then one line wouldn't then another 2 would ...

Thank you so much for the review & yeah I tried to really make the poem itself as simple as possible so kinda of emphasize how people are so caught ...

Thank you so much (:

Thanks (:

Thanks for the helpful review (: I typically don't add any punctuation or capitalization to any of my poetry just because I consider that my style but I have been ...

Aww thank you so much (: and don't worry, I liked the rampage, it was honest and I totally agree with it.