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Thanks!

Thanks! You've provided a lot of points that I haven't even thought about adding so thank you very much for that. I'll definetly see where I can add some of ...

The first line made me think of a tattoo but then it was like on a white page and it all made sense. This was really good, I liked it ...

Thanks for the comment!

Thanks! And basically, those lines are intented to emphasize how people think that hard work and confidence doesn't matter and musicians are just born musicians. I've defintely have a lot ...

Thanks! :)

You're welcome! I'm pretty sure that in all three lines you could replace his with their and it would work just fine. The second line you might need to switch ...

Thanks!

Also yeah, YWS really screwed me over with the formatting, the editor kinda sucks on here not gonna lie

Niall Horan of One Direction! Just in case you don't know who he is/what he looks like, this is what basically inspired this poem:

Thanks! I plan on heavily revising this (not because I'm ashamed but because I'm starting to think of where I wanna go with it). I'll definitely let you know when ...

Yes, it's alot better now :)

Thanks! I totally agree with you, flow is the biggest problem I've had with this poem. I think it's because when I wrote it, I just intended each stanza to ...

Aww thanks!

Thanks for the review, it was really nice and no one has ever told me that my poems or what I've created was beautiful so that makes me happy. But ...