heart_of_the_artist

The first line is kind of boring, but the rest is funny, ironic and very well written. I especially like the second stanza. My only nit-pick is that all the ...

This has potential, but with what you have it is kind of boring. I would suggest adding another stanza or two, give the poem more meaning, we know what you're ...

This poem's rythm is a little off, but I enjoyed it anyway. I like the story it tells, it's refreshing to hear someone say how much they hate someone, but ...

I love this poem, it is very inspireing. When you're at the top, With nothing to lose.. Dont let your gaurd down, You'll just get used. Dont give up Through ...

This was very interesting. I like the description you use in you're poetry. cool moonlight, so tender and pure, weeping eyes of heaven. silver arrows down to earth, gentle and ...

This was so beautiful and sad. I love how you start out as the girl and it's all sad, then you're telling the girl she is wonderful and can move ...

oooh, I can't wait to find out what happens next. I understand that she is upset by being stallked by a celebrity, but what did he do to make her ...

This is really well written and very emotional. I am lifeless and broken- Stripped of love, Stripped of light I am hopelessly drownded- Reaching for life, Reaching for love. I ...

I love the message this poem has, and the way you portray it. It starts off dark and gloomy and ends full of light. I must climb towards it Inch ...