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Re: Cow Moo Moo Revelation
Hi, Hunter here for a review, Your poem is a good outline. What id like to suggest instead of putting a break in the segments, try to make a simple ...
Mar 23, 2016 -
Re: This lonely ball.
The image in my head is intense. This poem has a strong meaning to you as the author it feels like. The emotion behind the writing is so meaningful and ...
Jan 22, 2016 -
Re: Learning to Let Go
I really like how smooth this flows. nothing i could pick out wrong. good job. keep this up!
Jan 22, 2016