haven235

If you really loved my idea, why weren't you harsh on it? XD You should've torn it to shreds, bit by bit, making sure that you'll continue to love it, ...

Oh your insight is very helpful. Thank you very much for the reviews. By the way, how long would you make an introduction? I'm intending to introduce the conflict in ...

Thanks for the review! The question mark on 1 /? is just a placeholder number as I don't know how many parts this prologue will have. Glad the dialogue between ...

Switching pronouns doesn't always make things easier to understand. I'd say, take time to rework it. If you have to, redo the whole chapter - but I DON'T mean change ...

The idea can be absolutely asinine but the story as a whole can still be enjoyable. It depends on how you work with it. And I believe that you'll lead ...

Thanks!

Haha~so my hunches were correct after all. Just wanted to say that. I haven't gotten to the chapter yet, but I will later, and then, review!

Still trying to get used to the code. The red F was supposed to be a dash

Hilarious

Pretty good start. Liking the story so far. Some elements remind me of several manga. Your writing style has a lot of personality as well, but sometimes you go a ...

I'm not really into reading romantic stuff, so the subject of this piece wasn't really interesting to me. But the writing was what made me continue to read this. Emotion ...

Thanks a lot!

Thanks!

Thanks for the tips!