harshita3chaarag

Thank you so much! I must say that was very encouraging indeed. And the thing with those extra 3 stanzas..I somehow felt it was incomplete without those. Originally I had ...

Thank you.. I'll try and make the changes you've suggested. Harshita :)

Thank you so much.. Harshita :)

Thank you. I guess I must have forgotten to divide those first two lines before I posted it, 'cause that's what my intention was. I'll see if I can come ...

Anytime.. :D

Hey there. Let me begin by saying....'WOW'. Your descriptions gave me goosebumps. The poem also flows very well. I love the way you speak of becoming strong through a challenge. ...

Thank you so much for the review first of all. Yes, it is the same guy. It took me a while to realise what an idiot I was being by ...

I don't know.. If he is the only one.. Then I wish all this hadn't happened.. I just hate the fact that one person now holds so much power over ...

I won't deny that I feel really guilty right now... Having caused you pain..even if unintentionally and indirectly... I know how difficult it is to forget someone you truly love.. ...

It's hard, yes... But the result is always so much more fruitful than something cooked up.. The emotion behind it real...

Thanks so much for the advice... I made the changes.. Removed the 'So' and converted all the 'He's and 'Him's to you.. Thank you so much! Harshita :)

Your poem is beautiful.. It's a brilliant piece of work... Loved it.. Harshita :)

Thanks a ton! I made the changes you suggested.. And is based on a real experience... An unfortunate recent experience... Harshita :)

Thank you so much! I changed the second half like you suggested.. I'll try and add some details.. I can't think of what to put.. All the reviewers guessed right.. ...

It was beautiful... I really loved it... The emotion really reached out to me and had be feeling everything you must have felt... It's brilliantly communicated and well written.. Keep ...