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thanks for the review! I'm glad you like the story and no, Einar never finds out that not all canned food is called Beans. If you want I'll finish uploading ...

thanks for the review, it seems I overlooked quite a few typos and punctuation errors when writing. I'll try to pay more attention when writing next time. I appreciate your ...

thanks for the advice, I'll keep an eye out for punctuation. Glad you liked it!

Thanks for the review, I'm glad you've been enjoying my writing! When Einar is shouting it's only to make himself heard over the rushing wind, not because he's particularly upset ...

He* can't see it, I'm on my phone and the autocorrect is acting up.

He* can't see it, I'm on my phone and the autocorrect is acting up.

Thanks for taking the time to review this chapter, it means a lot to me. I'll take the emotions into account more next time. Einar knew that he would be ...

thanks for the input, I'll keep an eye out for repetitions in the future. I'm glad you liked the chapter!

Thanks a lot for the praise, it really means a lot to me. As for Einar's character, I'm afraid that he doesn't have too much more characterization for a while. ...

thanks for the imput, I appreciate it. Overall, this story doesn't have a lot of dialogue except for in a few chapters, as most of the talking is done between ...

Thanks for the input, I appreciate it!

I'm not sure if that was where I got it from, but I recall finding it on some baby naming site and felt like the name was fitting, if not ...

I know this response is horribly late, but thanks for taking the time to review this chapter. I'm glad you've been enjoying it and I plan to continue posting chapters ...

I might not have internet in a day or two, I'll be travelling. In any case I'de be glad to have you look over it.

thanks for the input, I appreciate it!