happyslappy13

A poem about shadows... LOVE IT! This was something really cool to write about, and you did it reasonably well. Of coarse, capitalization and punctuation are pretty important elements of ...

Not bad. Is this a chapter? If so, I feel that it was kind of short compared to what I define a chapter as. It was good, and kept me ...

Hey! It's time for a......... SUPER ULTRA EPIC REVIEW! I admit that this is the first chapter of this series that I have reviewed, but it has made me curious ...

Hey! I forgot that I did not yet review this! Like me, I see you have put a lot of work into your prologue. It was well detailed, with perfect ...

Hello! It is time for a............ SUPER ULTRA EPIC-TIME REVIEW! First off, I know you have been hearing this a lot, but, I would STRONGLY advise the separation into paragraphs. ...

Impressive. I am not exactly the poetry-loving type, but this still lured me into the text. I also appreciate how it rhymes, some "deep" poets think that rhyming is not ...

A piece of Pokemon writing, eh? Not bad. Pokemon is an interesting subject, and it is easy to write about. I think Pokemon is a great way to write a ...

Great. Just great. I really enjoyed this, and I hope you write more. Just be wary of your sentence structure, because some of it was slightly unclear with the commas ...

Woah. Cool, man, cool. It's time for a happyslappy review! The first few sentences alone tied a rope around my hands. Do you know what this rope did? It tied ...

Let me say first-off that this is the most splendid piece of writing that I have ever come across! I conjures an air of mystery, while making the reader wonder ...

Review time! Like many, I found the plot so far to pull me in to the world. I really enjoy how this setting is centered around dragons. First off, how ...

Wow. Let me say that the interaction between your two characters here is both rich in interest and incredibly believable. You paint the traits of Sadie and Ruth with a ...