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  • Short Story » General, General Re: Positive (3) edited slightly different.

    whew! I have no idea why I like this story so much but I am a big fan! keep me updated! and again, amazing writing!

    Feb 3, 2009
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Positive Chapter Two (edited)

    OOOh plot thickens! Please PM when you write more I'm starting to really be drug into this !haha =D Sorry I was getting to much into it to nick pick ...

    Feb 1, 2009
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Like a Child

    amazing!!! Thank you so much for posting this!

    Jan 19, 2009
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Tears of the dead: Chapter 1 & 2

    AGH this is driving me insane! The more I flesh it out the more boring it seems! What do I do!?

    Oct 22, 2008
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: One cannot mute the imagined sound

    GREAT! your similes were astounding but you might have pushed them too far. Try to revolve around your main point at all times. It seems to me as if you ...

    Aug 23, 2008
  • Short Story » Fanfiction, General Re: In the Moments After...

    That was so amazing! I couldn't find anything to be mean about! It so sweet and yet still Harry Potter-ish GREAT job

    Aug 12, 2008
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: The tears of the dead: Prolouge

    Wow thankyou guys so much! I went back and fixed it all!

    Jun 23, 2008
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Tears of the dead: Chapter 1 & 2

    Thank you for posting!

    Jun 23, 2008
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Tears of the Dead: Chapter3!

    Thank you so much pawprint! That comment really brightened my day!

    Jun 23, 2008
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, General Re: My lady, we need you.[chapter3]

    OK... I have trashed the old version :D and made what you see now, enjoy! The happiest bear you ever did see! ________________________________________________________________________

    May 4, 2008
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: A Sacred Pact Part III

    wow! I know Im supposed to be criticing but I was so caught up in the story i forgot to look for mistakes! Perhaps I'll just have to read it ...

    May 4, 2008
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, General Re: My lady, we need you. [chapter-1]

    Sorry I had to stop all the sudden so it is short, but Im writing more Thank you so much for all your reviews so far

    Apr 30, 2008
  • Short Story » Action / Adventure, General Re: Panic

    Great story! I wish it would never end! 8)

    Apr 22, 2008


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