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Re: Imortalised
First of all, I would like to congratulate you for a job well done delivering this story. The categories you chose were mystery/suspense/supernatural--my friend, your story stayed true to it! ...
Mar 22, 2015 -
Re: Disappear
This is quite a literary piece, Kanome. Your words are very powerful. Line by line, they each carry such weight, such emotion. And by combining these, you've come up with ...
Mar 21, 2015 -
Re: The Story of Us Chapter One: Willie
Hello Stephjd9! I hope this review would help you although I'm not that much a pro when it comes to things like this. I like your beginning. It's powerful and ...
Mar 21, 2015 -
Re: 5 Million Pieces
Hello dogsrule5! It's actually kind of hard to review lyrics of a song without hearing it. That would come off as a challenge for you, then. How would you conjure ...
Mar 21, 2015
