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  • Short Story » Mystery / Suspense, Supernatural Re: Imortalised

    First of all, I would like to congratulate you for a job well done delivering this story. The categories you chose were mystery/suspense/supernatural--my friend, your story stayed true to it! ...

    Mar 22, 2015
  • Poetry » Narrative, Mystery / Suspense Re: Disappear

    This is quite a literary piece, Kanome. Your words are very powerful. Line by line, they each carry such weight, such emotion. And by combining these, you've come up with ...

    Mar 21, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Realistic Re: The Story of Us Chapter One: Willie

    Hello Stephjd9! I hope this review would help you although I'm not that much a pro when it comes to things like this. I like your beginning. It's powerful and ...

    Mar 21, 2015
  • Lyrics » Dramatic, Romantic Re: 5 Million Pieces

    Hello dogsrule5! It's actually kind of hard to review lyrics of a song without hearing it. That would come off as a challenge for you, then. How would you conjure ...

    Mar 21, 2015


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