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Re: The Last Breath of Fire Chapter 1 Draft 1
Hi Zontafer, Here to give you a review!!! Firstly I have to say that I agree with you there are very little details in your story, and I think that ...
Mar 20, 2014 -
Re: Sorceress- Chapters 1, 2, and Prologue
Hi So this is really really good by the way!!! But seeing as this is a review I need to mention a few things. “The fae are the most beautiful. ...
Feb 22, 2014