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Well, Ita. This was quite the interesting poem, yes. It seems that 'dark, depressing and soul-eating' poems are now your type. Well, I like it. Despite the long words present ...

Word placement and the way you have expressed your ideas is perfect, and the poem flows really well! There is really nothing for me to criticise here, as this poem ...

This piece is really interesting - the thought that they are so close, yet so far! The fourth and fifth paragraph in the poem conveys the feeling very well, that ...