gyrfalcon

Okay, here we go! (I really did do the whole thing this time, but as it's so huge, I'm separating it into different posts). Here's a sort of key in ...

:Edited: (to include wonderful critiques by all parties) You guys rock! Note: chapter two up!

Hey there, thanks everyone for the quick response! Thunder-Dude, your crit looks to be very helpful, just a couple things I feel I should clear up (and my bad for ...

Well, my darlings, my incredibly wonderful readers and fans and critiquers--we find ourselves in an interesting place. Gypsie Eyes has grown a great deal since I started posting it, and ...

‘A real life, honest to goodness hybrid?’ I may be wrong, but I think it’s supposed to be “honest-to-goodness.” ‘I’m sorry, I don’t understand you.’ She looked offended. Oh, come ...

Drat! Missed another chapter! So sorry, darling, shall get to it asahp (as soon as humanly possible). Meanwhile, I hope this shall appease you: ‘Do you have one near the ...

Dinner was a quiet affair. Moncreif and Danteel sat at opposite ends of the low table, the five women arranged on either side. All reclined on cushions, as was the ...

Lark had discovered his secret weapon—food. His mother, not trusting the campus-provided cuisine, had insisted that he learn to cook before going off to the university, and while he was ...

I love you Twit. And I love your nonsensicality. Nonsensicalness? You, anyway. Thanks a mil--will get to Scavenger's latest chapter asahp.

Danteel walked out of the shuttle, and into something out of his history books. It wasn’t a house. The closest word he could find, at least in Basic, was estate ...

Some things should not be committed to writing, I acknowledge that. And as such, I also admit the monstrosity of the folly I now commit. Perhaps I finally don’t care ...

This creature here. Even now, after months of being exhibited, that phrase still stung. An excellent line, but I would nix the “now.” It just sounds better to me. All ...

Oh, so this is Raven's story...*head/desk* I'm a dummy. But I have copy/pasted and shall begin work post haste!

Chapter Six Drop the count of prisoners available for questioning down to one, T’shaa said dryly. Hmm…I have a small problem with the word “said” being applied to mental discourse…but ...

Chapter Five of hay and dust and leather Commas are your friend! ‘And air’s the most important element.’ ‘To the Danann.’ ‘And that’s important, too.’ And what’s important too? the ...