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To all the loverly people who have posted: I went back and changed the (frankly horrible/confusing) Werewolf attack scene! Let me know what you think, and if anything else needs ...

...scandal? stranger? um....griff, I would love to oblidge but I don't think I understand. I do totally understand what you mean about spending more time describing "normal", I did that ...

:-) loverly poem, timjim, don't let these catter-walers (sp?) get you down! "hoenyed sunbeams"=very cool. *gives a cookie*

*pumping air into Vamp's ever-inflating head* Very nice. depressing, but me-likey!

Thank you, everyone! Snoink: you are vonderful, dahling, thank you so much! I went back and did my best to change those things you caught (great catches, btw). Some of ...

*smiles and blushes* thank's peoples! *sets out box of Oreos for all nice people who comment on her stuff*

Coolness! I like the concepts here, but try to keep up a consistant rhythm. Aside from that, very coolio.

Thanks fireweed! *gives a cookie*

Yay, chocolates! Thanks, both of you *blushes with happiness*

yeah...*blushes furiously* um, whoops? it's one of those things that you don't even realize until other people say something. how dumb can I be! anyway...yeah, i went back and tried ...

Love it Phoenixfire! Easier than jumping of a fourty-five foot tower, isnt' it? *snicker*

thank's timjim! *blushes with happiness*

Thank you SO much, timjim! I went back and totally understood what you meant; I tried out the changes you mentioned and it works sooo much better. Let me know ...

I really loved it. The imagery is so very...delicate, you don't overwhelm the reader or bog them down with too much "meatiness." It's ethereal, it dances. The words dance. I ...

Returning the posting favor! I really liked it, very good imagry in my head. not sure of the actual context, but I got the...the feel of it very well, really ...