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Yay! bird has edited, bird is happy. Myth: yeah, about Vishna......she has some.........."problems". she's not really all okay in the mental realm if you know what I'm saying. Oh, and ...

Yay! I LOVED the Bartimaeus trilogy--it truly is fantastic. I won't ruin the ending for you, ro, just know that it will be awesome. This book gets five stars from ...

Chapter 13 Karenna awoke to feel an extra few pounds of weight resting on her stomach. She looked, and saw a half-matured fox cub curled up on her tummy, sleeping ...

Yay! A new fan! :-) I hope to be posting more soon--look for the next chapter before the end of the week. Myth: *shame* I'm sorry!!!! I will get to ...

coolness!!!! *hugs* very loverly, darling.

Araidne--that's fine, as long as you give me credit! (happy valentines day)

Gassil was less than pleased to see him. “Yeah, I have the order,” she all but snapped as he stood waiting in the kitchens. “Do you have any idea how ...

:oops: Um...yeah, "below" not "bellow"...you think I'd remember that one........ :oops: Thanks again for the vonderful crit, darling, this and your catches for ch. 11 shall soon be integrated and ...

Chapter 12 Pagrin stood on the battlements of the stone wall that surrounded his home, watching the colorful trail of Gypsies wind through the gates and into his main courtyard. ...

Ahhhhhhhhhh, makes much more sense now, thank you darling. I shall do what I can to make everything more clear. Yes, when he's angry, Danteel's black eyes start to show ...

*bows* thanks again, my lady. I shall integrate this into the main draft, along with Myth's comments, and will try to have everything finished by tonight

When Danteel woke up, he was lying on his side, and there was something dabbing at the back of his head. For a moment he couldn’t remember, and then the ...

*hugs* Thanks, darling!

Myth: *bows, bows bows* Again, imensely helpful, darling!!! Not sure what else to say besides that--thank you so much! I will do my best to work these in over the ...

*bows* Myth, darling, you have the sharpest eyes I know--thank you for deinging to turn them on me! Your catches have been saved to a very safe place, and shall ...