gyrfalcon

Revised and updated. All comments are very much appreciated!

I just had to take this opportunity to thank you, all of you, for your wonderful help and encouragement on this piece--it's officially going to be published in my university's ...

:? I could've sworn I'd critiqued this one! Twit, darling, did I email this to you? If not, I owe you a whole buttload of reviews, don't I!

WHAT!!!! *goes into meltdown* Butbutbutbut... where? Where's the other one gone! *whimpers*

*blinkblink* People actually commented. I guess I'd better post more...

Mwahaha, I do love being the first respondent. It quite a large room that we were in, Bleh. Why not just “We were in a large room”—no song and dance ...

Twit, your catches are wonderful--thanks much! As to your question... How many children does Moncreif have? Has he had any by his alien mistresses, or is he using a kind ...

*waves white flag* By popular demand (please don't kill me, I know it's short): Lark dreamt that he was having tea with Lataar, but her teacup was full of the ...

Wherewherewhere whenwhenwhen is the nextnextnext installment!

Moved to Fanfic!

Yay! First to respond! But it’ll be going to a good home. This may just be me, but why should Dorian think Quennel cares about this? Quennel tried to fold ...

*wails* I'm trying to get Gypsie Eyes published, I'm afraid Danteel's been on the backburner a bit...and glaring at me from the backburner. :(

:( I'm so sorry that this took me so long to get to. Fortunately, I don't have much to say. Was the general finished with his interview? Jorge snorted. ‘Not ...

Thanks, everyone, for your awesome critiques! lyrical, my bad for not explaining this earlier--I do have a shorter version of this synopsis, much shorter (a paragraph), which I put into ...

Here we go, Part Two! Sara was sitting at the desk in her basement Should be ‘sat,’ methinks…scanning just the first few paragraphs, you might want to make it clearer ...