guineapiggirl

Thanks loads! Another really helpful review :D I will take you up on that offer for further reviews, you realise!

Thanks- you've pointed out some really helpful things there. :D I'll sort that all out when I do my edit once I've finished Part 1!

Thank you! I'll have a real look at sorting out those points. They make a lot of sense; I know what everything looks like in my head but unless I ...

Thanks loads! I think you've guessed pretty right!

Thank you! I'll look at those little grammatical thingys- I never knew about nor! That's very interesting. Helpful review. Thanks!

Thanks! I'll really have a think about everything you've said :D

Thanks! I guess this is all an introduction; the majority of the novel is going to be about their son, who starts a war! "WoW, that's all I can say ...

Thanks!

Thanks loads! I'll have a look at that stuff now!

I'll give this one a review too. :D

Thank you :D

I think you meant to post this in storybooks? To do that you just click on storybooks and then 'start new topic' or something like that. OK. :D P.S. This ...

thanks for the review! I don't normally do songwriting, and poetry only occasionally, so that's really appreciated that you said I've got some potential :D I'm curious that you say ...

Thanks! I think the first option for the end too... :D

Thanks! :D