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Hey Cotton, GPS here, finally. *Glares reproachfully* Ah well, forgiven. Now then, on to the review. Wait... Small error. *reads throguh frantically* There's gotta be something in here..... Gahh! Dx ...

Hey, GPS here. I pull out my knife that was concealed in waist. I think this would look better like this; I pull out my knife that was concealed in ...

Hey Skye, I figured I'd comment on this. I love the inner nachos idea, made me crack up. I love how the ideas are upgraded. Very creative. I also love ...

Hey, Gsp here, and I'll be your reviewer today. :) First off, let me say that I absolutely love this. It was interesting, and kept me hooked. The swearing is ...

Hey JD, Gspp here! :D It's on the streets, In people you meet, Even in those heartless souls. I like this line. I can't find anything wrong with it, so, ...

Hey roon, Crocks here again! Poser: This is my favorite of the three poems you put up. I probably like it because it relates to the MC in my book. ...

Hey roon, Crocks here! You stare, until your aching eyes forsake you. Best line ever! I can't really review poems, because I'm no good at them, but this is probably ...

*speechless* This is awesome! Nothing to suggest really, except this: I was a question Mary had never quite answered for herself. I think you meant 'it' here. Other than that, ...

Hey, gsppcrocks10 here as requested. :) At night I sometimes dream,But other times I don't.When I dream, it's not always great,Because my dreams I cannot always condone.Last night in particular, ...

Hey, loved this. One thing I noticed was this though. Caty was laughing as the operator at the end of the line asked her which service she required. “Police,” she ...

OMG! I was literaly on the floor laughing. *My dad enters the room.* "You need to quiet down." xD You get a gold star, but if it were in my ...

As I'm thinking about it I am also studying the dagger in my torn up hands; fiddling with it as a child would a knew toy but with a whole ...

OMG! Awesomely random. I LOVE DA RANDOMNESS! Sorry. NATE Howdy folks! TEAGUE Why didn’t you come on sooner? NATE Eh, the usual. SNOINK You weren’t playing the Sims, were you? ...

OH MY GOD. This is awesome! I seriously can't find anything to critque, except what the above person said. I can't believe that Wren killed that man! It just doesn't ...

Hey! I like this, can't wait to read more! Anyway, one of my old bro’s took to the country like an old buccaneer. He absolutely loved the place and everything ...