gruzinkerbell

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Hey-o! I see a good story to review! Let’s dive in. This seems to be a really good story, but I feel that in a few places there could have ...

This is very interesting. It keeps me wanting to come back for more. And I just wonder what you mean by saying that she went back to the heavens. Was ...

This is very interesting. It keeps me wanting to come Back for more. And I just wonder what you mean by saying that she went back to the heavens. Was ...

Hey I%u2019m glad you liked it! I%u2019ll try to keep posting chapters. By the way, how do you add photos to comments?

This story is awesome. It has such a Marvel vibe. Like the epic backstory of twin superheroes fighting time by freezing or slowing it. Or maybe Encanto. It feels like ...

So glad you liked my story! But this was simply and unfinished world I summed up as a short story and posted on here. But thanks for the advice!

Thank you for reviewing my work! Unfortunately, this was only supposed to be an unfinished piece that I mainly only finished just to post it on here. But I%u2019m glad ...

I only read the epilogue-but so far, it's pretty good. Only a few minor typos. And I love how the guard's names start with the same letter. I do something ...