greatman

Thanks a lot Warrior it means a lot to hear such positive feedback! I'll definitely try to finish it soon for you to read, I posted a little more but ...

Thanks a lot MLanders. Means a lot that you like it and that you'll like to read on. I'll definitely post the next part again soon and I'll let you ...

nice stuff wolf liking this story. i think this had good dialogue to it and it really would get the reader interested.keep up the good work :)

lovely poem there realy imaginavite and has nice sweet touches and good luck with the work man :)

i like this quite funny and entertaining ;) keep this up its very good :)