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I thought that might be the case, but thought I'd still throw the suggestion out there anyway! Glad at least one of the comments was helpful.

Beautiful! I love how this poem isn't overly dramatic, but rather just relatable and honest. Keep on writing.

This poem is sad and beautiful. It sounds like a song - was this written for music?

This poem is so cool! I love the unique metaphors.

That does make a lot more sense! XD Thanks for the context.

Thank you!

Thank you! I appreciate your feedback. It's helpful to hear how different readers interpret the story. :)

Thanks for your feedback! No, you don't sound rude. I appreciate honest suggestions for improvement. :) Yes, I agree with your point on "irrational" fear. My main goal with this ...

I'm glad to hear you picked up on the rationalization of an irrational fear. The main goal was to show that while we might call a fear "irrational," and while ...

Thank you! Did you see any specific errors in grammar or spelling? If so, I'll try to fix those. ;)