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I don't know if you read the other chapters, I think it goes into more detail on everything. Since it's only the beginning I don't want to give too much ...

Yeah it did, which is why I slowed it down a bit in the further chapters. I'm glad you like it though and I hope you like the rest!

I am so so so glad you liked it! Going to try and write the fourth chapter soon! Would really love if you could read it c:

Well, my comment got deleted lol so as I said before I do agree with you on the length. Which is why I added a bit more description. I also ...

Hi there, going to nit pick a few things. "Father used to say there were stories, old dark stories silenced by the hand of history: that's what he said." I ...

Going to nit pick just a bit. "But tonight was important, and this queue was taking forever." You shouldn't start a sentence with 'But" maybe try adding a comma before ...

That first line got me too, I kept re-writing it but I couldn't figure out how to say it better. But I think I will just change it to a ...

I know, I really need to drag it out a bit more, but it's hard when you have so much in your head and you just wanna get it all ...

Thank you! I'm glad you like it. I can't wait to continue writing it, I have a lot more up my sleeve c:

I'm the same way with beginnings, I'm actually not sure how it turned out so good haha. I'm so glad you like it, though. I did realize I was going ...

Thanks so much for reading, I'm flattered you like it (: And Yes I will definitely be writing more to it, I just like to put the first chapters on ...

I'm so glad you like it! And I originally wanted scathing, but you guys are right, I like scratching better. I've always had a problem with grammar, but I'm getting ...