goodolnoah

OOO! I really like the idea of adding a specific time between timeskips! Perhaps it will be something I would definitely look further into on later stories since I like ...

My hatred for Theo grows by the second.

Just popping in to say I LOVE THIS COVER ART!!! I plan on keeping this in my log so I can come back and read it soon, it looks really ...

Yesss I hate the symbols! Thank you for the explanation!

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Ooo, this is very nice! I've never seen a poem similar to this where Birds and Fish are used in a metaphor relating to love. I think you achieved the ...

Ouuu, I really like the changes you suggest here. I think I have trouble with whether or not to keep sentences together haha. I appreciate the suggestions and I plan ...

Thank you for the review! I will certainly look into those changes. Your tip about adding sensory details helped a lot! I am happy you have taken an interest with ...

Very nice observations you made about Kitty! I%u2019m happy their relationship came off well. Since Fi knows nothing about Kitty%u2019s past, I really wanted them to be more like the ...

Sorry for the jumble of text there - it was supposed to be a happy emoji :)

Thank you very much for the review! Your kind comments really made my day ( %u02F6%u02C6%u15DC%u02C6%u02F5 ) I also appreciated your keen eye with my spelling error - edits have ...

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Hello again! Writing Commentary The writing, is yummy as always! Everything fits well, and I didn’t spot any typos or issues along the way! Another comment, usually when dialogue is ...

Thank you very much for the review! I appreciate the compliments and criticism as well. I think something I have to work on is sentence structure, so the comment about ...

Certainly bro!