I liked the ocean
You liked the sky
Both so blue,
Both so deep
But still,
I felt a connection
A connection so strong
That it broke
I needed to swim low
You needed to fly high
I tried to come to you
You tried to come to me
But we both failed
And that was when
I finally understood,
That we were never meant to be
Because,
I liked the ocean
And
You liked the sky
Wow, this is an awesome poem written by the poet.
"I finally understood,
That we were never meant to be
Because,
I liked the ocean
And
You liked the sky"
Yes, there is always a love story which never fulfills because 'Opposite always attracts'.
This is more like a couplet telling how affectionate and passionate the lovers are, but few differences make them apart.
Such an amazing poem in which each and every line is so powerful and effective.
Keep it up.
Waiting for more.
Thank you.
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I ADORE how you used the image of sea and sky in this poem!
I liked the ocean
You liked the sky
Both so blue,
Both so deep
I felt a connection
A connection so strong
That it broke
I needed to swim low
You needed to fly high
I tried to come to you
You tried to come to me
But we both failed
I finally understood,
That we were never meant to be
Because,
I liked the ocean
And
You liked the sky
Ooo, this is very nice! I've never seen a poem similar to this where Birds and Fish are used in a metaphor relating to love. I think you achieved the idea of an "unworkable" love
I felt a connection
A connection so strong
That it broke
I needed to swim low
You needed to fly high
I tried to come to you
You tried to come to me
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