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  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: The Daughter of War - Chapter 35: Together

    Hello again! ~ Writing Commentary Josephine imagined standing beneath star-lit skies on the darkest of nights, where the heavens stretched endlessly above her, adorned with countless shimmering conste

    May 30, 2024
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: The Daughter of War - Chapter 34: Traitors Belong in the Underworld

    Hello again! ~ Writing Commentary With a sudden, savage snarl, Cerberus lunged forward, its three heads converging on Jase with terrifying precision. Before the monster could reach him, Josephine took

    May 30, 2024
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: The Daughter of War - Chapter 33: Nyx

    Hello again! ~ Writing Commentary Persephone sighed and closed her eyes for the first time in hours. The eyebags under her waterline were starting to get irritated. She needed sleep. ...

    May 30, 2024
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: The Daughter of War - Chapter 32: The Tower

    Hello again! ~ Writing Commentary All of the souls in the Underworld awaited judgment; some would be tortured for the rest of eternity and others would live peacefully in the ...

    May 30, 2024
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: The Daughter of War - Chapter 31: The 'H' Stands for Hades

    Hello again! ~ Writing Commentary Unless you obey and cut all ties with Josephine, you will no longer be allowed in the Underworld. I do not take well to the ...

    May 30, 2024
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: The Daughter of War - Chapter 30: To Look Inside a Heart

    I have finally returned! Hello again! ~ Writing Commentary Overall, writing was beautiful. A bit of nerdy rambling here…I was so hyped to read this chapter that I just had ...

    May 30, 2024
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Mystery / Suspense Re: Chapter Two:Wither 1.2

    Hello again! ~ Writing Commentary It’d was like the entire world was being split apart and reassembled. Like her bones were no longer in her flesh, simply suspended within. I ...

    May 30, 2024
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Action / Adventure Re: Chapter One: Donut Crumbs 1.2

    Thank you again for requesting a review on my review page! Now, let’s get into this glorious story! Hello there! ~ Writing Commentary James brushed his hands together. The toasty ...

    May 30, 2024
  • Short Story » Horror, Narrative Re: Jenna's Black Eyes

    Wow! This was a great and spinechilling read! Let me give some of my formal thoughts... Hello there! ~ Writing Commentary Jenna began to scream in her sleep. Rushing into ...

    May 24, 2024
  • Short Story » Dramatic, General Re: Behind Closed Doors

    Wow! This was quite an interesting and captivating tale. I am just popping in for a quick review! I like this as a short story, and the pacing is quite ...

    May 21, 2024
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: My Prolouge!

    Hello Stranger! ~ Writing Commentary Oooo, interesting first chapter! I can only wonder what this story will be like continuing forward. It seems there is a mysterious ghostlike figure stealing ...

    May 16, 2024
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: The Daughter of War - Chapter 29: Over My Dead Body

    Hello again! ~ Writing Commentary Woah! This chapter certainly had a lot of great moments! Josephine watched with teary eyes as thunder cracked outside of the shed, causing her to ...

    May 16, 2024
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: The Daughter of War - Chapter 28: Connecting the Dots

    Hello again! ~ Writing Commentary Jase knew that she was more than just a wise deity. Jase knew that there was some sort of resilience and savagery that stayed cloaked ...

    May 16, 2024
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: The Daughter of War - Chapter 27: Bloodline

    Hello again! ~ Writing Commentary The healers, thank gods, were able to successfully remove all roots and growths from her brain, only leaving a few in Persephone’s lungs. Good to ...

    May 16, 2024
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: The Daughter of War - Chapter 26: Reflections

    Hello again! ~ Writing Commentary Jase glanced around them and rolled his eyes as a group of men cheered at a table closer to the bar. A small, petite, brunette ...

    May 16, 2024


You can cut all the flowers, but you cannot stop Spring from coming.
— Pablo Neruda