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Re: Delirium - Chapter 2
Hello Raven! Happy new year and I have returned to read chapter two of this intriguing story! Writing Commentary The mechanics of a paranoiac, trying to push new obsessions and ...
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Re: Delirium - Chapter 1
Hi Raven! I am happy I’m finally able to check out your own writing! Hopefully I can follow your Delirium chapters as they release. Writing Commentary there was a head-splitting ...
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Re: Unnamed Story (Short Story Series No. 2)
Greetings! Just stopping by to leave a review on this interesting story! Hello! ~ Writing Commentary If rain has started to pour down on you and the sun is only ...
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Re: ankyl-atel-form
Oooo! I really love this poem! Being a sophomore undergrad in college myself, it's pretty relatable to think about. To work on college all while trying to grow as a ...
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Re: Of Victory and Death - Chapter 1: The Visitation
Hello there, one of King Koopa’s loyal henchmen, here! Another wonderful story by Ley, and I am finally able to pop in for chapter 1 upon release! From a quick ...
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Re: Mage Chapter 6
Hello there, one of King Koopa’s loyal henchmen, here! Hello again! ~ Writing Commentary Lord Marala tossed down a card, “Death is our way of life, after all, even Lady ...
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Re: Mage Chapter 5
Hello there, one of King Koopa’s loyal henchmen, here! Hello again! ~ Writing Commentary In the west wing of the Royal palace, inside his private quarters sat Lord Anala of ...
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Re: Mage Chapter 4
Hello there, one of King Koopa’s loyal henchmen, here! Hello again! ~ Writing Commentary Tushta blinked, before his brain could formulate as answer his companion spoke, “My Lord, we shall ...
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Re: The Daughter of War - Chapter 37: Foolish Goddess
Hello there, one of King Koopa’s loyal henchmen, here! Hello again! ~ Writing Commentary Josephine readied her flames, Jase summoned his shadows, and Aphrodite’s aura shined even brighter than bef
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Re: The Daughter of War - Chapter 36: Into the Depths
Hello there, one of King Koopa’s loyal henchmen, here! Hello again! ~ Writing Commentary The air was thick, almost tangible, carrying a scent of damp earth mixed with an ethereal ...
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Re: Mage chapter 3
Hello there, one of King Koopa’s loyal henchmen, here! Hello again! ~ Writing Commentary “We are not weaklings Lady Gandini, we are simply cautious, if you had been so yourself ...
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Re: Mage Chapter 2
Hello there, one of King Koopa’s loyal henchmen, here! Hello again! ~ Writing Commentary It had caused great turmoil, but the spaces were not left empty, Aadrika had stepped forward ...
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Re: Mage
One of King Koopa’s loyal henchmen, here! Hello there! ~ Writing Commentary Sorry it took so long, but I have finally gotten to reading this wonderful story of yours! Ancient ...
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Re: I Swear I’m Straight! (PrideMonth Poem)
This is such a cute poem! (I actually relate a bit, I present as straight but feel the same way about liking someone regardless of gender. Perhaps I am pan ...
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Re: Alice and the aliens: Part Seven
Hello there, one of King Koopa’s loyal henchmen, here! Hello again! ~ Writing Commentary “Captain D9302 killed my parents. All because they didn’t believe in her philosophy. We’ve been traveli
Jun 24, 2024
