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Hello again! Writing Commentary Your writing never fails to keep me invested. The part where “thunder” erupts was quite gripping. Earthquake, is her first, (and for a moment, only,) thought. ...

Hello again! Let’s get on with the review, eh? Writing Commentary Your descriptions are great, as always! One of my favorite things in this chapter, honestly, was the dialogue. I ...

Hello again! I have returned once more to review your second chapter! Writing Commentary They arrive at Monsbury and meet the mayor. The sequence where they walk through the ashes ...

Hello stranger! I saw that you were up to chapter 6 in the green room on this story. I wanted to check Witch of Rotten Borough out because it seems ...

Hello Stranger! This piece caught my eye since it’s a fantasy and a supernatural work, fantasy is one of my favorite genres, and your writing style looked very nice. Anyway, ...

I wasn't expecting this for a prologue! I like the way you are making events happen out of order. It's interesting that you like to hide mini details in the ...

Oh wow! After reading the first chapter, this gives some really interesting details on Antares' character! I am curious as to whether or not she meant to commit these murders, ...

Hello stranger! I came across this on the green room and the title caught my eye! I also like fantasy, so it looked like an interesting read. Writing Commentary The ...

Hello again! Writing Commentary The writing, is yummy as always! Everything fits well, and I didn’t spot any typos or issues along the way! Another comment, usually when dialogue is ...

Hello again! I have finally returned to read the first two actual chapters of The Antiquity! The first thing I can say about this, is that I like that I ...

Hello! This work was very nice and I wanted to leave a quick review! I love the theme of persistence despite shortcomings/struggle here! I hear that you are a newcomer ...

Hello again! Writing Commentary Like you had said, there was a bit more for description, I would still be looking for more. For example, during fights, go more into detail ...

Hello stranger! I found this story and it felt like a blast from my own past. I used to write in a manor quite similar to the way you write. ...

Hello there! I stumbled across this on the homepage and the title hooked me from the start. When I looked at the formatting of this, it looked really fun! 🗲Writing ...

Hello! Another great addition to the Antiquity. It really fleshes out the story and allows us to get a birds’ eye view of what the plot holds in store for ...