goldentouch

its nice, to the point, short theres a few errors here and there but other then that i love it, good work.

i like the colors! a very intriguing title and great writing!

thanks for the feedback.

i really liked it, it seemed so purposeful...i felt connection because it is true and real not just some poem from the back of someones head.

i really liked it i was grabbed by it so you are a great author i liked the vocabulary and dialog bits, great mix. your really good. (:

that was amazing! (: