goldenrebel

Thanks for the responses guys. I didn't use comma's because I was thinking too much like this was an academic piece. I'll try to refine my grammar and continue the ...

Okay, thanks for the tip Veeren. I'll take that into account and see what I can do with what ideas I have right now.

I fixed it now so that it says prologue and not epilogue.

Thanks for the comments guys. I might continue on with the story but right now I'm deciding between this, another story idea that I have posted, and one more that's ...

Since I can't edit my reply. I think I'll try and create a religion around the four horsemen so that they will have an importance to the story.

Thanks man, I told my parents that I was writing a prologue and they said that it's after the end of the book and that an epilogue was before, so ...

Thank you Demib. I was sort of've thinking of continuing this story and just improving upon it with more and more chapters. :)