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Re: The Coliseum Can Crumble
I loved this story. There was a really good flow to it, and the perspective from an indecisive mother was on point. Haha anyway, I loved how you related the ...
Mar 23, 2016 -
Re: Roses
Hi there! This story was so good. I can't emphasize it enough, it was that good. I love a good story (who doesn't) and it was so well written. I ...
Mar 23, 2016 -
Re: Ghosts of War.
Hi there! I thought this work was very interesting and I enjoyed reading it. Wars aren't good, but the stories they hold are inspirational and are wiser than we'll ever ...
Mar 22, 2016 -
Re: An Orange Bird
This is so good, and I have never read anything like this! It really describes things about dealing with pain and 'inner struggles' as people grow up, and I think ...
Mar 20, 2016 -
Re: To Live in This Moment
I absolutely loved this poem!!! The imagery and the metaphors are very, very well done. I feel my favorite part was this: "They say pictures are worth a thousand words, ...
Mar 20, 2016 -
Re: Mist
This was such a pretty poem! Your imagery was very well done. I don't know if this poem's style is how it's supposed to be, as I am not the ...
Mar 20, 2016
