gokubrother

Hello, it's your friendly neighborhood Goku! Personally, I don't see anything wrong so far. The writing is detailed and gives the reader a clear view of what's happening while leaving ...

I'm gonna need it. I'm sitting here writing poems when I should be studying.

Thank you for the suggestion (and the punny joke)! I'll take a look at it and see what I'll do.

Thank you very much for the feedback, dogs. I assure you, the thesaurus was a great asset in the composition of this text. Well, when I wrote the word "leaking" ...

Thank you very much! It's the first poem I've written in a while so I'm surprised people would like it that much. :)

Viajeraaaaaaaaaaa!!!!!!! ^_^ siempre me gusta leer tus reviews y I'm gonna try adding some stuff (first draft). Thanks for the help Vale!

I posted this for me. Period.

Out of all of my poems (not posted yet), I didn't really like this one much. It was written at a very vulnerable point and I question what I was ...

I also did find that stanza a little off. Hmm. I'll think of something. But I overall appreciate both of you guys' feedback!

It seems like the story is moving along... slowly. It's pretty good except your story has a lot of grammar issues in it. Other than that, why is Dennis so ...