godlypopo

Realise is spelt with an 's' where I come from :p

Haha. Thanks!

I said that the floor was a broken ice cap. I was just thinking that ice oozes water as it slowly melts. I don't know really... I was hyper when ...

If all else fails (part one)

Thanks haha. I love your idea of 'bloody hell where did you come from?!' I will be sure to include this

I can only see the prologue mow

This is a very nice piece of work! I love it. You have very good grammar and it kept me reading throughout. Like TeaLeaf said it would be a lot ...

Yeah you will learn more later on. Sure I'll go chech it out!

Thanks! Would you really want to go back to that kind of sister?

Thanks! My auto correct was not working for some reason. This meant I had no way of knowing my spelling and grammar mistakes.

Thanks!

(I clicked on this as it was my name :D) This a beautiful poem well done xx

Ok! Cool! Congrats on your first review :)

Thanks!

*journey oops