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Re: Corruption of the City
Wow, this is wonderful. The emotive and descriptive language is so beautifully strong its a work of art. The repetition of 'burnable' and 'bloodthirsty' well portrays the tone of the ...
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Re: 2.28.15
Wow, this is wonderful. It is short and too the point, but still manages to convey a powerful message. I like the irregularity of the structure and the way in ...
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Re: The Life of a Horse
I really enjoyed this. You are definitely a skilled writer. This is relatable for most people (including me), especially the way in which you described it as your first friend. ...
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Re: In Her Head and In Her Eyes
Aww. I absolutely loved this. It is a perfect descriptive and emotive piece describing some of the problems teenagers face, and the way they feel isolated and alone because nobody ...
Mar 1, 2015
