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goddessathena

  • Poetry » Dramatic, Horror Re: Corruption of the City

    Wow, this is wonderful. The emotive and descriptive language is so beautifully strong its a work of art. The repetition of 'burnable' and 'bloodthirsty' well portrays the tone of the ...

    Mar 1, 2015
  • Poetry » General, General Re: 2.28.15

    Wow, this is wonderful. It is short and too the point, but still manages to convey a powerful message. I like the irregularity of the structure and the way in ...

    Mar 1, 2015
  • Poetry » Realistic, Narrative Re: The Life of a Horse

    I really enjoyed this. You are definitely a skilled writer. This is relatable for most people (including me), especially the way in which you described it as your first friend. ...

    Mar 1, 2015
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: In Her Head and In Her Eyes

    Aww. I absolutely loved this. It is a perfect descriptive and emotive piece describing some of the problems teenagers face, and the way they feel isolated and alone because nobody ...

    Mar 1, 2015


Anger is an acid that can do more harm to the vessel in which it is stored than to anything on which it is poured.
— Mark Twain