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goddessathena

  • Poetry » Dramatic, Horror Re: Corruption of the City

    Wow, this is wonderful. The emotive and descriptive language is so beautifully strong its a work of art. The repetition of 'burnable' and 'bloodthirsty' well portrays the tone of the ...

    Mar 1, 2015
  • Poetry » General, General Re: 2.28.15

    Wow, this is wonderful. It is short and too the point, but still manages to convey a powerful message. I like the irregularity of the structure and the way in ...

    Mar 1, 2015
  • Poetry » Realistic, Narrative Re: The Life of a Horse

    I really enjoyed this. You are definitely a skilled writer. This is relatable for most people (including me), especially the way in which you described it as your first friend. ...

    Mar 1, 2015
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: In Her Head and In Her Eyes

    Aww. I absolutely loved this. It is a perfect descriptive and emotive piece describing some of the problems teenagers face, and the way they feel isolated and alone because nobody ...

    Mar 1, 2015


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