glowinginthedark

Good job, I enjoyed reading this poem! This is really lovely. I liked how you made it rhyme, its not easy to make it rhyme in such a short poem. ...

I actually really like the title! I saw it and was like.. "ooh! I gotta read this." Personally for me I didn't understand the first two paragraphs. This stanza is ...

This is a really lovely poem. It made me think differently of weddings in a way. But I think you may need to work out and watch the punctuation of ...

Hi there! I really like this poem, but there are some points that I would like to pick up on. It's a little bit confusing on how the lines end ...

I enjoyed reading the start of this story but there's a part that I'm abit iffy about. "I hear footsteps padding down the hall and then the unlocking of the ...