girlwiththelaptop

I'm so excited to see how this progresses! There is so much foreshadowing and it's so well written. I love that you were able to write from the perspective of ...

Babyhemingway, this screenplay is quite graphic but I think you executed it in a very artistic way. Get it? Executed? Okay sorry back to making useful comments. If I interpreted ...

I am in love with this poem. It's so honest and so easy to relate to. i love the gradual change in tone so there's no definitive moment in which ...

There is so much to say about this. First we'll start with the good things because there are so many I want to say before I forget. Your imagery was ...

This was an actual dream you had? Well, you posted it under other so I'm assuming it wasn't necessarily supposed to be a fully developed story. It was certainly an ...