girlwithquestions

HAHA. i love your writing. It seriously makes me laugh out loud. I can totally see this going somewhere!! I'm excited for when you post next! =] Good job, so ...

This was pretty interesting! The only thing is that you repeat yourself and say the same thing in a number of different sentences. It does set the mood, though. Over ...

Alright. First I'm gonna say I'm sorry, because I realized that when Renee was put into her cell, it was dark, and she probably couldn't have seen Will. And that's ...

wow. this is just a school project?? you should definitely turn this into something, if you would want to. It's really good!! If you don't get an A from your ...

come on!! just have melody hook up with Nathan already! he's my fav by the way. hahah. you're really good. keep goin! these chapters are addicting!

man. you're really good! I love how you get right to the point of what's happening in your story without making it seem like it's going to fast. and i'm ...

man. you're really good! I love how you get right to the point of what's happening in your story without making it seem like it's going to fast. and i'm ...

wow. this was good. it was very moving, and the way you wrote it (format) caught my eye! i liked the part where you wrote something about how this decision ...