gigirl942

Good job! :D I really liked the concept and the imagery in this. It was like you were slowly painting a picture in my mind using your words. But I ...

This is very good! You did spell "dream" as "dram" in the second to last stanza though.

I'm not sure if I see how this is romantic fiction... It's a multi chapter. You'll get it when I post the first chapter. This is just the prolouge.

Pretty good, gigi! :D The only problem was that you had a few grammar flaws here and there, but great start! :) Thanks! Could you point out the mistakes for ...

Interesting....but good. I had just a little bit of trouble following who was telling the story, though. Like what you put in the introduction, setting the ground for the next ...