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Ahh, yes, I do despise those double dashes, thank you for the tip. And by 'leads' I mean the heavy metal 'lead'. Thank you.

I don't prefer capitalization on the whole. Thank you for the comment.

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Interesting analysis. You can interpret the poem however you want and make meaning of it. But for me, this is just a literal poem. It's winter and I am just ...

Thank you.

Well, wreak me, I knew I spelled wreak wrong. Also, I was a bit wary about the reason of the narrator's death being too vague. I wonder if anyone else ...

Speaking from personal experiences when a cat is on my lap, I get up when I begin to lose feeling in my legs. Cramps, and all that, you know. I ...

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Oh, wow. That's brilliant. I love the concept. If you ever were to elaborate on the concept, please let me know. I love it.

I'm half delirious from being sick, so this isn't a review. And I'm terrible at reviewing free-verse poetry. I was intrigued by the title, and I don't really know much ...

Thanks for the review! This has definitely given me some ideas to work with.

Thanks for the review! I'll keep the comments in mind.

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I actually do these huge jumps between scenes throughout the entire story. There's a reason behind the vagueness, that's pretty much what I'm aiming for. Thanks for the review, I'll ...