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Re: For Leelah
Exactly you should have explained a bit about who the leelah is? may be somewhere in the middle of the paragraphs you could have written it about her. overall the ...
Feb 25, 2015 -
Re: Censorship
Its beautiful and amazing piece of writing i found here so far. Each line goes in a flow and it beautifully describes the pain of a person who sees her ...
Feb 25, 2015 -
Re: Innocent Child Hidden from Humanity's Lies.
Besides the formatting and everything i believe that somewhere your poem is very confusing because it does not really highlight the subject clearly. i read the poem twice to exactly ...
Feb 25, 2015 -
Re: Life
The poetry LIFE is good but i feel the poet should not be so pessimistic because life has to offer alot it does not rotate around the failure, rejection and ...
Feb 25, 2015 -
Re: Glimmer Of Hope.
i found this poem very well structured and it was just going smoothly in a flow. This seemed so like me lol. i would not say it was perfect piece ...
Feb 24, 2015
