geraldine13

thank you will try my best next time i promise

thank you will try my best next time i promise

thank you will do as you said glad you liked it since its the first piece that i have written online other than my journal

i love the way you did your introduction captures the readers eyes and mind. The story takes the reader along on how the writer feels giving a sync motion between ...

lovely piece which requires a strong introduction to keep the reader in the story. Just a little sparkle of suspense gives an good example of whats happening in some of ...