geoffles

Thank you! I'll keep your input in mind.

Thanks for your review~! I'll keep your suggestions in mind. :D

Thanks for your review~! I'll check it for grammar mistakes. :>

i love it.

Thanks for your review. :) I actually wrote this originally in my first time in the ward. The whole walking around in circles thing? Actually happened. The pillow was covered ...

Forgot to add that you literally made my day. ^_^

Thanks so much! I'm honored that you think of my work so highly! :)

Thanks so much for your review! I'll keep your suggestions in mind. :3 As for the ending sentence, I struggled with that quite a bit but finally settled on the ...

Thanks bunches! I didn't notice the small paragraphs, I guess I just write like that normally. i'll keep that in mind when I write longer. :)

Heck yea!

thanks! :0

Thanks so much!! :0 i'll keep your edits in mind and go back over it.